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Dear Sue,

I'm sorry I haven't written for such a long time. How are you doing ?
I ‘ m writing to you because I ‘d like to tell about it a new pair. Our friend Tom was meeting beautiful and nice girl: Lise. Tom was fall in love with her.
They was meeting in cinema. When We were on new film (“Avatar”). Lisa was sitting near Tom. She like him. Tom ask something Lisa . And then their acquaintance to start.
Lisa is very beautiful girl. She is wearing fashionable clothes. Lisy is nice and helpful. She is help me when I broken leg.
They look so happy. I thing they are good pair and I hope they will be very long time. And do you thing about it ?
I hope that you write to me.
Yours ,
Xyz


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na szybko:
I ‘ m writing to you because I ‘d like to tell YOU about MY FRIENDS WHO BECAME A COUPLE.

Our friend Tom HAS MEET A beautiful and nice girl: Lise. Tom FELL in love with her.

They MET in THE cinema When WE were TO SEE A NEW film (“Avatar”). Lisa was sitting near Tom. She likeD him. Tom askED something Lisa AND THAT'S HOW THEIR RELATIONSHIP STARTED Lisa is A very beautiful girl. She WEARS fashionable clothes.

LisA is nice and helpful. She helpED me when I broke MY leg.They look so happy. I thinK they are A good MATCH and I hope they will be HAPPY FOR very long time. And WHAT do you thinK about it?
I hope that you write BACK to me.
Yours,
Xyz